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This line graph shows how many men and women read books from Burnaby Public library between 2011 and 2014.
Overall, it is clear that men had a continuous rising trend over this period. On the other hand, even though women read more books than men in the beginning, men read more books than women in the end. (여기는 구조가 쉼표 앞부분과 같으므로 수정해보세요~)
As can be seen from the graph, the number of books that men read rose gradually from 3,000 to 4,000 between 2011 and 2012. However, after this, the amount of books that men read increased dramatically from 4,000 to 10,000 between 2012 and 2013. It then The graph hit a peak in 2014 at about 14,000 books.
On the other hand, women read more books than men in 2011. Then, the graph of women showed a gradually increase between 2011 and 2013 from 5,000 to 10,000. However, right after the graph reached the peak of 10,000 books, it had decreased gradually by 2014.
In conclusion, even though women read more books than men during the first 2 years, men overtook women in the following year in Burnaby Public library. (이미 위에서 언급된 사항이므로 다시 반복하지 않아도 됩니다. 분량 채우기에 불과해요.) |