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The diagrams shown in this layout depict a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park these days. Overall, there are a lot of changes in the garange park. (일단 고유명사는 대문자로 시작해주셔야 하고, 변화 자체가 있는 건 누구나 알 수 있는 사실입니다. 변화가 있었으니까 두 개의 지도가 제시되었겠죠. 이 변화가 대략 어떠한 양상으로 이루어졌는지를 큰 그림을 통해 설명하는 게 중요해요.) In 1920, this park is the showed a very simple layout. On the middle of the diagram, there is a fountain. On the west of the fountain, there is a stage for musicians. These two facilities are removed at present. On the north and south side of the stage, there are many facilities such as seats, the rose garden, and the entrance, respectively. (너무 On~~ 으로만 시작하지 않도록 수정해주세요.) At present, there are notable changes. Firstly, the fountain is replaced by the rose garden which is surrounded by seats in each aspect. It is clear that the entrance still remains. Secondly, there are some changes such as the elimination of the stage for musicians, the creation of an amphitheater
for concerts and the entrance underground car park. Finally, the glasshouse is displaced with a water feature. (Firstly, secondly, finally 의 구조는 너무 단조롭습니다.)
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