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The reason why many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization in today’s world have been regarded as an issue of debate. I will analyze the reasons why they choose self-employment and the disadvantages when they are self-employed in this essay assay.
One of the main reasons why people choose to be self-employed is that making one's own brand has become easier than before because of the development of the Internet internet. People can easily make an advertisement of their brand by themselves and upload it on SNS and YouTube. Because these ways do not be required much amount of money, people can start without financial pressure of money. Another reason is that there are people who feel uncomfortable when they are told to do something from someone. They want to be free to act and talk when they work and these kind of people want to work for only themselves. It is because people can make their own choice whatever they want if they are self-employed.
However, there are not only brighter sides on self-employment. People who are self-employed have to be responsible for every choice of themselves. When people work for a company or organization, they do not have to take all responsibilities of everything about work. But (문장을 and but so 로 시작해서는 안 됩니다.) when they are self-employed, they are in charge of all mistakes they have made because they are the owners. Another disadvantage is the irregular earnings. Once people start their business themselves, they cannot be assured with their earnings. In company, people can get regular salaries when not only the company earned enough money, but also when they could not get enough. But if their own businesses are under a the bad monetary situation, they cannot get any money from that.
In conclusion, self-employment have both of advantages and disadvantages. But people only can handle the all responsibilities and burden should start to be self-employed because they would be responsible for all choices not only good one, but also bad one. (결론이 논제와 글을 전혀 반영하고 있지 못합니다. 원인과 단점에 대한 요약만 해주시면 되고, 장단점으로 나눠서는 안 되며 제언을 해서도 안 됩니다.) |