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It is true that there are the an increasing number of parents who allow their children to play on technological devices, thinking that children have to learn technology skills. Some argue that children (너무 자주 반복되고 있는 단어이므로 중간중간 대체가 필요합니다.) can get the benefits by the means of utilizing the computer and tablets. However, others claim that children can be affected by the disadvantages from playing on those devices.
On the one hand, some people argue that the advantages of playing on the technological devices are so practical that children can use the skill of dealing with those devices in improving their lives. For example, since society in these days usually consists of many technological inventions used in many industrial areas, the technological skills are essential in every social situation of getting a job or searching the information. Furthermore, in the period of childhood, children tend to achieve the ability of skills about everything easier than the other period of lives. (이거는 컴퓨터/태블릿을 사용함으로써 얻는 장점이 아니죠.) Hence, it is efficient that more and more parents let their children to play on computers and tablets.
On the other hand, I would agree that these advantages are outweighed by the drawbacks. Other people claim that young-aged children are prone to get the harmful sides of technological devices like computers and tablets. For instance, on the Internets, since a lot of contents are created without certain morality and ethics, young children can get affected by the harmful contents that leads them to wrong ways such as crime and illegal situations. In addition, using technological devices make children hinder to get deep attention. Since the contents on those devices are consumed fast quickly without giving them a chance to think deeply thinking, children can not improve profoundly improve their the profoundly intelligent abilities ability. Thus., although they can know about how to use technological devices and skills, there are many potential disadvantages about using those devices.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that more and more parents should not let their children play on the computers and tablets for children’s better lives. (제언을 하는 게 아니라, 장점보다 단점이 많다~라고 적어주셔야 합니다.)
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