Your Answer ▼The trend that is currently appearing in modern society concerns the issue of whether this has positive or negative, which people change their electronic devices when not necessary. Even though some people think that it is just a waste of money to buy often new devices, I personally think that this is the flow of time and there are positive facts.
To begin with, many people nowadays change their devices in a short period of time to keep up the pace with the quickly-changing social trend. Especially, smartphone, electronic cars, 3d television have easily replaced by latest products. This is because many companies all over the world release new models to meet people's wants. and technology development is accelerated by these demands. It is a common need for people to buy the latest devices not to fall behind the trend, so many people quickly change their devices though they do not need. For example, there is a company in South Korea called SAMSUNG. This company developed new technology added the smartphone, which allows individuals to access safely to their smartphone by perceiving people's pupil. As a result, it meets people's concerns about privacy security. and it becomes very popular for a lot of people.
As the example clearly show, people's wants lead companies to develop technologies, so it can be a positive effect on people's future. If many people stick to their original devices for a long time, the reason that companies develop new technologies would disappear, and the economy would go through a recession. Moreover, many experts have pointed out that this trend boosts the economy more briskly. As people spend more money, positive results have returned to them. It is commonly known that people's expenditure has a significant effect on economic development as it contributes to accelerating the economic cycle.
Overall, after concerning the cause of people's tendency that often purchase new electronic devices and whether this has a positive or negative effect on societies, I support the fact that this trend is desirable and boosts economic development and new technologies.
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