The given two maps illustrate before and after construction of the island tourist facilities. Overall, the island is about 1km in length and 300m in height, and after the construction, there are much more facilities and other constructions which was built.
To look at the map closely, before the construction, there were only trees on the right and left sides of the island, each about 300m far from the center of the island. There is also a beach at the left tip of the island.
However, after the construction, pier was built at the center downward of the island, related with a vehicle track which leads to reception center. Passing the reception center, heading upward, a new restaurant was constructed. On the left side of the reception, with the footpath trail, some trees are still remaining as it was mentioned in the former map, and 6 accommodations are surrounding it, each reachable with footpath. Further left side, following the footpath for about 200m, it leads to a beach for swimming. On the right side of the reception center, there are 9 accommodations located, which can be reached to each other by footpath road, but the accommodations are not connected to reception center by footpath nor vehicle track.
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