These days many families move to other countries for
work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this
move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the
children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
One of the major concern of parents is where the place is suitable to learning environment for my children. As the result, they often decide to move to other region. Some people it really helpful to children, whereas other people argue that migrations cause to confuse to young people. Both views will be discussed and I think the latter view is more persuasive.
To begin with there are some reasons why cities are preferable area to parents. Along with the advent of tremendous technology, governments started to establish capital and metropolis that located near the capital. Due to this fact, it can be seen the gap between cities and country sides like quality of welfare system and public facilities even school. For this reason, a good number of people believe desire to live the big city relatively in order to enjoy that.
The phenomenon that migration other city has advantage influence on young people. It is important to the life of children that they experience as much as possible and then these diverse experience such as meet different kinds of people in new place become a foundation that would be helped in the future. For example, they can learn how to make a new social network in the process of make friends in new high schools.
However, children can suffer from some problem because of migration. When they move new area, they had to adjust new place, friends and people. Of course, there are some children who have good ability of adaptation but plenty of young students are seen reject of some actions like school refusal. It is mainly because, psychological the sense of security is essential to young people. In other words, they are still immature so that face to some strange situations are quite difficult.
In conclusion, although it able to build some experience, it make to encounter unrest condition psychologically from migration to the new area.
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