The pursuit of wealth has become the main motivation for many business owners nowadays.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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It is a common belief that the chasing of riches encourage many business owners, and it affects a good development in society.
However, there is more persuasive argument that the act of accumulating wealth negatively affects that can lead to financial crimes by some people who think bad ideas.
On the one hand, national economy can grow fast when companies have motivation about making a lot of money. The desire to acquire wealth people to make business more successful. The success of company contributes greatly to the development of the national economy. Take the example of Samsung, which is the biggest company in Korea, and this company also has been growing up. This not only make company bigger and creates job for company, but also helps country's business grow by selling products such as stocks and paying taxes on exports.
Nevertheless, the wrong ways of making money would lead to financial crimes. Some owners tempt to skirt laws for money because these actions such as stock investment fraud, real estate illegal speculation and loan fraud, which could endanger citizens belonging to the their country. Hundreds of swindlers such as small company's owner or paper company's owner are caught by police every year, the main reason to crime is that they can easily earn money and save a lot of money at one time with only a few fake documents and equipment, which has led to an exponential increase in number of victims, which damages also amounts to hundreds of billions of dollars. These problems have an adverse effect on society as a whole.
To sum up, while there are some positive development to business owners pursuing wealth, it is evident that the negative development of making money illegally on becoming rich outweigh them.
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