Some people believe that unpaid community should be a compulsory part of high school programmes(for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children)
to what extend do you agree or disagree?
On these days a lot of programs in high school are encouraging students to serve their community without payment. In my opinion, I agree that high school students to have an unpaid service to community as a compulsory part of the school.
On these days, most of the high school student’s parents try to make their kids only to study on their academics. Parents encourage students to apply for the higher ranking universities, not caring about their growth of conscience, or ethnics. Since most of the parents try to make their kids to invest time on their academics, school polices are changing too. True meaning of education is diminishing and only examinations and competitions are remaining. However, this should not be a primary goal. Schools must educate students to become adaptable to community, and make themselves devoted to society. It is quite obvious that students would not do unpaid affairs of the community by their own will. Hence, schools have to make it as a program in order for students to participate the events for their society.
Furthermore, it is essential for them to feel the atmosphere of others. For example, by working in a charity or helping the poor neighborhoods, students recognize something they had never felt before. By attending those affairs, students are to realize the importance of their family, how precious their life is, or how happy they are at that very moment. It is actually a school’s duty to collaborate with community and give students a chance to learn what they must do for their society and opportunities to become a better person.
Teaching sociable recognition is one of the important things what school must do. By participating students in unpaid community services, students will have chance to learn what is important other than academics.
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