The bar charts compares the number of
admissions of the period of the year 2007 and 2014.
It is clear that the most popular course by
admissions at UK has changed from Law to Nursing over 7 years. We can also see
that the worst popular course hasn’t changed and it is still computer science
of the year 2014.
According to the chart of 2007, there were
about 90,000 admissions of the Law course and it slightly rose up to about
100,000 admissions but it took the third place. Similarly, Pre-clinical
medicine has increased slightly but we can see that its rank had fallen down
compared to 2007.
However, the Nursing course has gone up
dramatically approximately 170,000 admissions and occupied the first place in
2014. Other courses like Psychology. Design and Computer Science has also
increased to each about 100,000, 100,000 and 15,000 in their admissions.
However there aren’t any changes in their rank.
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22일 시험 예정이고, 목표 점수는 6.0에서 6.5입니다! 시간은 63분으로 조금 오바되었고 외부 도움 없이 혼자 작성했습니다. 어떤 방향으로 고쳐나가면 좋을지 피드백 부탁드립니다 :)