The punishment at an early age has been
neglected in a current society last two decades since 2000. In this essay, in
spite of the fact that the social environment has been dramatically changed
every single year, I completely agree with this opinion.
I personally believe that a wide range of
punishments to the children is mandatory to form a self-identity during
childhood. It is a significant point that the general education system all
around the world is equally the same which is providing fundamental academic to
the children to become the right person later. Furthermore, building personal
ability in judging a right and/or the wrong choice starting from childhood
could be taught and obtained in a proper punishment way. It will become a great
asset when someone grows up.
There are main places where children get a
chance to be educated in both their home and school. In a house, parents have
to pay attention to a lot of factors for children and give specific
instructions to them appropriately by making some punishments such as the
limitation of playing a game or giving some chocolates and candies within a
strict boundary area both parties mutually agreed.
Moreover, tutors in school need to make a
more rigid standard rules children always shall be followed. Unless students
complete homework within a given timeframe in a class, the teacher might hit
someone’s
hand as a punishment.
In conclusion, the appropriate punishments
for children by parents in home and tutors in school would be a significant
important factor to build right relationships with someone in a society when
they grows up.
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