1. 5번 째로 작성해본 task 2 글입니다. 슬슬 task 1도 공부를 시작해볼까 합니다.
2. 목표는 오버올 6.5-7이며, 시험은 5월 경 생각했으나 3월 21일에 테스트 삼아 쳐보려 합니다.(대전 소재 어학원 생각 중)
3. 해당 글 작성에 꽉 채운 40분 걸렸으며, 사전 등의 도움을 받지는 않았습니다. 글쓰는게 어렵고 성질나기도 하지만, 수동적으로 문제를 맞춰야만 하는 리딩/리스닝보다 재미있네요 ^^
Q. Some people believe that parents should devote more time to helping their children with shoolwork Others think that they should allocate more time to playing sports with their kids. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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There is a disagreement about the issue whether parents should spend more time on helping their children with studying or on playing with them. Both arguments have valid reasons.
There are some people who believe that parents should be care about their children's academic work. They insist teaching occured in the school is not enough. Because in classes, one teacher has to cover many students, so it is very hard for them to get proper directions by each level. In other words, though every student in a class has different comprehensive level, teachers cannot but help delivering their lectures in the same way to all of their students. on the other hand, parents well know about their children's own academic abilities so they can teach them in the most appropriate ways. In this way children can learn without losing their interest in the subjects.
In contrast, other people have an opinion that parents should devote their time to playing with their kids. This is because they think physical activities are not enough in schools compared to academic works. This can lead to some health issues such as kids obesity. On top of that, children can develop their caring personality and social skills through playing with their parents. Because they can learn how to interact to others or yield their turns while they play sports with their parents.
All things considered, I personally believe that parents need to allocate more time to playing with their children. Because there are plenty of other people who can help them with schoolwork, and I think it is a kind of area that must be dealt by professionals. However when it comes to playing, parents should play a role by sharing their time with kids. It is essential for children to form right attachment to their parents and also develop positive characters. Besides, playing sports makes children have better physical strength and it helps them concentrate better in schoolwork. For these reasons, I think parents should put more time and energy into playing with their kids.