걸린시간 : 19분 32초
목표점수: 7+
시험이력: 아이엘츠 시험 첫 응시이며 시험날짜는 3월 7일입니다
강의만 듣다가 처음 작성해보는 Task 2 글 이고, 작성시 실전시험처럼 도움 없이 혼자, 시간재고 하였습니다.
Direction: Art and music classes should not be mandatory at school.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Some people think that giving students art and music classes is not necessary at all.
However, I personally believe that school should offer students art and music classes. There are severeal reasons that support my opinion.
First of all, by taking those kinds of classes related to art and music, children can find out their creativity which is a helpful and useful skill throught their whole lives. For example, students express thier feelings or thoughts by drawing a picture and painting or listening to music and singing a song in art and music classes, respectively. Those activities can improve studnets' creativity effectively.
In addition, students can have opprotunities to deal with their stress. In 21st century that we are living in, modern society systemleading to intense competition among people can be burdensome to young people and as a result, they get stressted a lot these days. Art or music classes create chances for students to relive stress by doing some artistic activities. They could forget their problems and feel comfortable anf refreshed though the classes.
Of couse, I agree the idea that school can save more time to allow students to focus on their study, if they delete those kinds of classes. However, I strongly believe that study is not everything for students to do. Even though it is an important and major duty of students, they should be guaranteed to take artistic classes such as art and music.