The diagrams show the layout of the city hospital before and after renovation between 2007 and 2010. The most conspicuous feature of the diagrams are the staff and public car park are separated into two car parks. The staff car park was located as the same place with before, but the public car park was moved to the right side of the city hospital and it had extended almost double in size.
Looking at the diagrams more closely, one can see that while there was no bus station and it only had six bus stops, bus station was relocated next to the staff car park. Furthermore, two roundabouts were built which are connected to the bus station and also the hospital road, the way to enter the city hospital from the city road. Last but not least, since the three bus stops, which was located right side of the hospital road, were eliminated so that about a third of the staff car park was extended.
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안녕하세요 3월 14일 아이엘츠 시험이고 each 6.0 and overall 6.5받아야하는 상황이라 라이팅은 우선 6.5 목표로 공부하고있습니다 첨삭부탁드립니다 감사합니다!!