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Question:
You have a large extended family, and every year you all get together to go on a big family trip for a week. Your brother is in charge of the plans this year, and you would like to suggest a place you’ve visited before.
Write an email to your brother in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:
- Name the destination you have in mind.
- Briefly describe your previous experience in this place.
- Talk about some of this place’s features.
Answer:
Hi brother,
I have been thinking about the place for our family trip, and I would like to suggest Okinawa. Okinawa is southern area of Japan, and since it’s tropical area, it’s warm and sunny all the times. That’s why I think it’s the best idea to go to Okinawa in February. We can get away from winter and enjoy Summer.
I have been there one time with my friends. Okinawa has beautiful weather and sea around the island. You can enjoy swim and surfing. They also have unique area which has mixed of Asian and Western culture. You can see international people in the Japanese way. That was cool
Also, there is a amazing place to stay run by airbnb. I guess that is big enough for our family to stay. Let me contact them and I’ll get back to you.
Please let me know what you think about Okinawa.
Thanks,
Sunny