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Some people believe that genetically
modified crops can solve food shortages and should be encouraged. Others think
that genetically modified crops can cause environmental problems and require
further research. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
These
days, it is commonly said that genetically modified crops can result in
environmental matters and should be clearly proven through further research about
their usage. However, I firmly support the idea that these modified crops can
solve food shortages.
Firstly,
some people concern that genetically modified crops can cause environmental
issues because they have the potential to destruct eco-system which should be
naturally functioning by its own. Take an example of one livelihood project
funded by ABC international NGO in the rural area of Tajikistan. This NGO
distributed genetically modified seeds of potatoes to the community members,
aiming to improve their local economy with these potatoes. However, unexpected
results came out, occurring severe floods every year since the modified seeds
made a harmful effect on the land.
Although
the advanced crops have negative aspects of the environment, they should be
encouraged because they can play a vital role in solving food shortages.
Nowadays, many agricultural products are getting susceptible to the unpredicted
weather conditions such as floods or droughts. This leads to people suffering
from the lack of food, especially people living in the vulnerable countries.
Luckily, it would be possible to generate stable farm products by utilizing
genetically modified crops in any natural environments. For example, Uganda had
serious food shortage problems due to the lack of water during dry season. The
Ugandan government tried to apply genetically modified crops such as corns for
their local farming with many times of trials and errors over the two years.
This new approach by using modified corns made a great amount of production,
solving the food shortages over every season.
To sum
up, it is apparent that genetically modified crops have pros and cons All
things considered, I believe that there crops can bring a positive solution for
food shortages and should be more actively encouraged in the globe.
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