Q. Some people say that children should be made to obey rules while others think children who are controlled too much cannot be well-prepared for their adult life. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
There is a controversy regarding making children abide by regulations. Some people say that it is inevitable, but counterparts argue that pushing them too much is not a good method of upbringing. In the society, there are many rules that parents make their children do, but I would say that it can make them have the limit in their life.
It is true that there is being many kinds of rules required in child's growth process in terms of social rules. Children who follow parent's saying are less likely to be exposed in dangerous situations. Simply,for example, if children who obey the rule well stands on the crosswalk on their way home, they would abide by the traffic rules very well without any doubt as they have been done. Also, they become a good standard one among their peers, so they are more likely to get a chance to be a leader in school.
On the other hand, parents have a tendency on pushing their child to be fixed in the standard criteria. Not all children have the same thoughts of rules made from adults, so if they try to persuade their child on their own styles instead of trying to understand their child side first and communicate each other, they would become rebellious. Moreover, they have the possibility to infinite creativity during the grow-up. A lot of regulations can hinder children have creative ideas.
To conclude, there are convincing arguments both for and against making children obey rules in their childhood by parents, but I am convinced that controlling children too much gives rise to the problems such as the sense of rebellious and the hinder of creativity.
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