Films were produced by big companies in the past, but today people are able to make a film. Do you think this trend is positive or negative?
People have different views about the trend that films are made by
individuals. While some people argue that only large-scaled companies should be
allowed to make films, (이거랑, '독립영화가 부정적이다' 는 전혀 다른 사항입니다. 임의로 바꿔 작성하지 않도록 주의해주세요~) others assert that by producing a film by many participants,
it causes a positive effect on a society. I opine that the current trend brings
more benefits and I will discuss it in more detail.
First
of all, when it comes to considering impacts on individuals, films produced by numerous
people have positive influences on their careers. People who want to be a director
can create a film based on their imagination and personalities and it could be
a chance to attend a movie academy or find a job as they report it as part of a portfolio. In other words, making a film could be a first step to develop their
dream. Moreover, people can produce a film not only to communicate with others but
to make a profit. For instance, nowadays, many people upload their own films to
websites like YouTube Youtube. By uploading them, they can earn money based on the
number of views and it helps people to reduce financial difficulties.
Meanwhile, making a film A film made by individuals also causes casues
an economic effect on relating industries. As the number of people who want to produce
a film increased, the sales of cameras or equipment needed to take a film also
rises according to the increasing demand. Furthermore, the diversity of movie
industry will be improved by participation of individuals. Many people have different
viewpoints and personality. Films made by them would be different from that for
big companies which mainly concentrated on a profit. As a result, there are
numerous films with various subjects and it attracts more people to enjoy films.
In
conclusion, I believe that the increase of films made by individuals would have positive effects on both individuals who created a film and industries
relating to the film.
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