Question:
You live in a house near a park. Recently, a lot of teenagers have been meeting in the park at night. They are very noisy.
Write an email to the local government in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:
- Provide information about where you live.
- Explain the problem and how it affects your life.
- Suggest a way to solve the problem.
To whom it may concern,
Hi (예전에 말씀드렸나 기억이 확실치 않지만, 여하튼 편지글에서는 이 편지가 공적인지 사적인지에 따라 인삿말을 달리해주셔야합니다. 물론 서양이 동양에 비해 상대적으로 예의에 대해 관대하지만, 그래도 누군지도 모르는 정부 관계자한테 hi~라고 하는 것은 좋지 않죠.) This is Sunny Lee. I’d like to report an issue of noise from Central park near my house.
The park’s address is 1823 Inchon St and my house is situated right beside the park.
I’m working as a teacher and enjoy leisure time at home on the weekend. However, I’m struggling with noise from the park. Some kids often hang out over midnight and they are pretty loud. Also, they watch a movie on their laptop using Bluetooth speakers from time to time. I’m frustrated that I can’t sleep because of them and it affects my work performance the next day.
May I suggest that sending to send people who are in charge of charged in the maintenance of the park environment from the government and handle the noise noisy with kids. Also, it would be great if the government can hang the a sign about the restriction of noise in front of the park.
Thanks for reading my email. I’m looking forward to talking about it soon. (추가적으로 더 얘기한다기보다, 경과에 대해 들을 수 있었으면 좋겠다~쪽이 낫습니다.)
Sincerely,
Sunny Lee
총평: (7/6/7/6) 6.5
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