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Commonly, some people insist that the government should use budgets to take advantage of developing social welfare systems or the defence industry. However, I firmly believe they need to spend money on improving the sports industry as it enables many nations to boost their status broadly and public health generally.
The main cause of advancing the sports industry is to strengthen their nation's image by sponsoring a variety of events. Although there are other methods to introduce a country, funding on this potential industry is the most effective way to pay attention to international people. To support this idea, the U.K was able to improve their image by encouraging British citizens to play Rugby, Tennis and Cycling, which were originated from the U.K and teach how to play these sports to other countries' people. In another case, Korea could build up their status through both holding Seoul Olympics in 1988 and the FIFA world cup in 2002 and scoring 4th grades among more than 150 countries.
Hence, I agree that sports can not only people entertain regularly but encourage fitness as well as stimulate whole economy. To be specific, many people can alleviate stress by watching their favourite sports on the pastime. As a matter of fact, the U.S people tend to watch the Superbowl, which is the final game of National football league, and regular seasons' games as a means of reducing stress at work. When they watch games, most of them prefer ordering Chicken wings and Beers so as to enjoy. This additionally contributes to growing the U.S economy.
To sum up, building up and investing in the sports industry is worth its weight in gold in connection to developing a nation's image through opening global events.Then, it has positive impacts on people's happy feelings and economic growth. (on time, 300 words)
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