A tendency that the news reported in the media focuses on problems and emergencies rather than the positive developments is harmful to both the individual and the society.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Recently, the news reported in the media focuses on social issues and negative events frequently rather than the positive news. It can occur negative problems to both a person and the people. This essay will deal with an agreement about the above statement.
Spreading a lot of negative news can cause an abusing. News in these days is a effective weapon to spread the individual and the organization's propaganda. For their desire of power, they can make a crisis atmosphere in the country, and they will create a plan in order to maintain their authority or obtain a power by abusing the people's crisis conscious. For saving the value of the democracy and the freedom, we have to protect unnecessary negative news from the our citizens. Therefore, we have to restrict it because it has a danger to abuse.
In addition, unnecessary news surely gives people an enormous pobia. In the country with pobia, there are no belief between the people, and it leads to avoiding each other. As all the people sympathy, this world is not a place which we want to live. Moreover, we must realize the duty of the government. They have to reduce the people's concern. If media was the main reason to cause the concern of the people, the government have to manage for adjusting the reporting system. Because this unnecessary negative news article can make an over pobia in the country, we have to restrict their reporting system properly.
To conclude, due to overed pobias and unexpected abusing's danger, people an the society can be damaged. Hence, it is strongly believed that the news that is involved a lot of unnecessary negative articles can affect people and the society.
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in these days => these days
Pobia => Phobia
Overed => excessive
a effective => an affective
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