Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. |
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In global history, there was industry revolution which changed the destiny of human enormously and it became significant part, however, many people agree that it was the fuse of environment devastation due to carbon dioxide and fossil fuel. Even though the nations have been developed by the revolution, the growing number of people struggle to have fresh water and it is becoming an international issue. In this essay, the problems of the shortage of fresh water and the solutions will be discussed. One of the issues can be caused by unpurified water is that diseases such as malaria and measles. These days, the innumerable number of people are suffered from the illness due to unrefined water contains bacteria, mold and odor which give detrimental effects on the human body. This issue can be settled by performing the national campaign to change the way to intake water such as a bowling water campaign. As water bowling removes loads of pathogens, it prevents numerous diseases. However, not only health problems but also financial issues can the huge trouble that can be occurred. People need to purchase purified water which means only people in wealth can afford it, whereas people in poverty are not likely to have fresh water. Subsequently, poor people need to go to the clinic after intaking water with bacteria and should spend more money than rich people to heal themselves which may cause inequality of society. The administration should construct the national water institution to offer purified water to the people and must manage it as a national scheme. In conclusion, health issues in society can be solved by enhancing the perspective of the way to taking water as a campaign, and wealth inequality is able to be settled by establishing national service.
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