Computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion. |
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It is true to say that the computer becomes a fundamental part of human lives since we can do loads of works by operating computer, however, some people argue that the computer should not be the most important part of school class as it brings many drawbacks. I opine that the computer invites loads of positive effects on children. Many people believe that the computer is one of the most significant electronic devices along with mobile phones. Before the computer invented, students only could learn from the books and sometimes they needed to lean on their imagination, however, as teachers are able to make various and fabulous materials which cannot be made by human hands, students are able to study subjects by high quality and well-made lessons. Lastly, children may find their future job such as a programmer, pro-gamer and so on by familiarizing themselves to the computer. Therefore, the computer brings innumerable advantages. However, there are several negative effects have been suggested. One is that, children are not able to learn every element of school classes from the computer, for instance, poems, music and arts as these are parts of the human being that mankind developed based on human creativity. Furthermore, the computer conveys stimulate information such as adventurous videos which is highly addictive. Therefore, young people are easy to lose their interest in other options besides the computer works and it will become a tragedy if people do not know how to entertain themselves without computers. In conclusion, even though some people against the drawbacks what computers are expected to bring, I consider that using the computer in school, far outweigh the downside.
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