Some people argue that arts, such as paintings and music are a waste of money and the government should spend this money on other services. To what extent to do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In recent years, whether the government allocate their budget on arts business or not is one of the heated discussions to the public as well as the government. Some people argue that it is waste of the money and the government should spend these money to other services while some people say it is necessary. I think it is necessary that spending money on artistic department. In this essay, the reasons of the arguments will be elaborated.
First of all, developing the art industry in terms of the government can rise the quality of life of citizens. It is quite difficult to people to enjoy if the business of art is operated by individuals. This is because the enterprise only think their profits and if the art business is conducted with the government, the governments’ first goal is improving the quality of life and aimed to social work. For example, people can enjoy their leisure time at the art galleries or watching plays which are performed by the government in lower price. As a result, if the government allocate some amount of the money in art industry, many people can enjoy the high quality of arts in low price.
Secondly, the government should give same importance as well. The antique artworks and music should be protected properly by the government so that they should give the same attention and these artworks are precious properties of the country in many purposes. For instance, in Korea, the government developed the art business and gathered many artworks for the educational purposes. As a result, allocating the money on art is not a waste of the time and it has many educational benefits to the next generation.
To sum up, the government has many things to do with their money, but focusing on other department is not fair as the art area is important as well. In terms of the government, it can rise the quality of life of people and it has many beneficial purposes on education. I believe that it has to be the same importance between art and the other services.
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ㅇ문제에서 말하는 painting 이나 music 에 대한 해석을 Antique로 이해해도 상관이 없을까요??