*Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There are many people living in a outside of home country. Sometimes, they are suffering the situation as like couture shock. I agree with the opinion that living in a foreign country can cause serious problems socially as well as practically.
Firstly, people living in a different country have to take everything like culture, social system, etc. Nevertheless, it is not easy to adapt that situations. cultural differences make people more harder when it comes to their daily life. For instance, Drinking alcohol outside is allowed in Korea. However, it is common not to be allowed outside in the most countries. Many Korean make mistakes outside of their home country.
secondly, people can cause social problems when they don’t get used to settling in new country. Some migrants live in a pool condition. They can not get good job and then they may give up willingness when they came to foreign country. They can easily find how to live as bad way. Bad ways are included in stealing, joining in gang. This can cause social problems and harm innocent people.
in a conclusion, I agree with that living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. This is because migrants make cultural mistakes and it might break the law. Also, people can hurt good people.
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