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Nowadays some people believe that advertisements help people to buy some stuff. Others think that we do not pay attention anymore about these because it is really trivial in our society.
On one hand, there are people arguing that the exposure of advertising to people might bring some positive aspects. For example, when new products release that are necessary to us, some people might not know about those, so there will be man cases that they cannot purchase even if they want to get them. Moreover, if some products are promoted by lower prices, people can have a chance to get a good bargain.
On the other hand, others claim that advertising does not have merit effects to consumers. To explain, people nowadays s tend to search online if they need to buy something. Therefore, many people are not interested in various advertisements. Thus, as long as commercials suddenly appear to us, people always try to skip it and delete it. As a result, these days, consumers do not really pay attention to various advertisements and some people will not agree to subscribe to given information from companies.
In conclusion, it is apparent that advertising is sill conducive to us buying some stuffs. However, it is undeniable that it is not really necessary to advertise because people do not influence advertisements anymore and it is really common in our lives.
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