■ Direction· Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
· Task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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Topic ▼ | There are many extinct animals’ species in the world nowadays. Some | people say we should protect these animals from dying out, while others | say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. | Discuss both opinions and give your personal view. |
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Your Answer ▼The issue of whether to protect animals from extinction has been one of the severest discussions in modern ages. Some people argue that it is essential to put an effort on protecting them, whereas others don’t agree with that and say there is no time to figure out our matters. In this essay, I will compare both point of views and explain my opinion. Personally, I strongly advocate the former view because most of sources come from the nature, especially from animals and plants. In terms of food chain, it is easy to misunderstand for human that they are at the top of the chain and can control nature natural events. However, if we leave them with being disappear, other animals that are closely connected with them cannot be found in our kitchen. Furthermore, they can be used to find historical or scientific fact. For example, we can mimic their originality to make lives better. On the other hand, there are people who want to ignore this situation. To protect them, it is necessary to invest lots of money and human resources. At the beginning of this step, the outcomes cannot be seen clearly, and they think putting more pressure on solving urgent problems is more beneficial with the same money. Moreover, they would say there are no advantage for themselves and it is for the future generation. This is long-lasting projects and it is hard to know spin-offs by solving this sever situation. To conclude, there are pros and cons concerning this issue, but we cannot maintain our lives without them because even extinct animals that people treat uncarefully have a huge impact on the environment. |
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채점 기준 | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Total |
Score (9점 만점) | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 |
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