Your Answer ▼ In modernized society, these day's generation tend to talk about the the topic, money, in a rest time or while eating lunch or dinner with their companions or friends, because most people consider that money is one of the most important factors in their life. However, It seems to me that this situation isn't good phenomenon with having two problems.
First, when people pay attention to money too much, they can consider that everything can be done by money, which is a matter when it comes to morality. For example, most people wait in a line to buy concert ticket in a ticket box. On the other hand, some people buy these tickets with other purpose that sell tickets to other people who want to enjoy concert, but don't have enough time to wait for a long time, with receiving three times more charge from them. This situation is not equal, which government is required restrict such kinds of things as a rule.
Furthermore, when people want to earn more money, they can willing to do their task with spending their most of time on working with lots of energy. In Korea, especially Samsung company introduced the pay system in 2010, which encouraged workers to compete with other by achievement. In that year, lots of employees didn't go back to their home, instead left in their office until the late night, average 1 am. As this result, in first quarter, cooperation's earning was upgraded from 20 to 50 percent. But as this system went continuely, its effect worked as a not efficient way. In the end, in next quarter, their earning was decreased sharply, owing to their worker's condition. Day by day, workers was exhausted and unfortunately, they willing to quit their job. They had no choice except that because their health went bad. This shows that company focusing on money ends up bad result.
In conclusion, I would like to say too much absorbing on money causes society to be damaged economically. |