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이 주제에 딱히 academic한 example이 생각이 안나더라고요 그래서 25분도 넘기고 ㅠㅠ
완전 relevant하다고 생각도 안하는데 티가 나는지 좀 말씀해주세요. 점수도 1-6중 얼마나 받을까요? 감사합니다.
아 참 그리고 SAT essay 에 I써도 되나요?
Is it really impossible to fail? Are some failures simply unsuccessful attempts to accomplish what we set out to do, or do all failures ultimately provide some benefit, even if we can't see it right away? Plan and write an essay in which .... observations.> As the society changed going through numerous innovations in the past including dramatic developement in science technology such as internet, various people from different races and ethnicities are enabled to collaborate in society today. The diversity of culture and personality of the different groups can lead to an enormous probability of ways for a certain task to be done. Among the options, is there only one right way to be followed? The answer is no. In the same context, Susan B. Anthony's words of "failure is impossible" is totally absolute, and the evidence can easily be found in the history of invention and the example of Steven Hopkins. There is a famous proverb, "failure is a mother of success." It states the essence of failure as for people to learn from their experiences. As a matter of fact, the so-called "failure", the unsuccessful attempt or mistake, contributed to the discovery of peninsulin, which is used as a vaccin for a certain virus. It was discovered when a scientist failed to control the dependant factor of an experiment; it eventually lead to a synthesis of certain bacterias, which is the peninsulin today. There are also a lot of other famous inventions that are said to be created from mistakes. Another example would be about Steven Hopkins, the notable scientist in the field of astronomy. His original theory about blackhole in space was appraised and evaluated remarkable when it was first intorduced. However, several years ago, Hopkins appealed his first theory and announced a new theory to replace it. It would be a hard and embarrassing thing to recognize oneself's mistake towards the world. Even though his own first idea had to be disproved by his very ownself, by admitting the fact Steven Hopkins could construct a more academic and logical theory, expanding the right knowledge in the benefit of human beings. With the two examples of the invention of penninsulin and the reversal of Steven Hopkins, it is clear that failures are not simply unsuccessful attempts, but ultimately provide some benefit. Thus, failure should be considered as another possible result. Furthermore, it should not be named failure in the first place, but regarding the principle of trial and error, it should be called a steppingstone to success.