거창한 제목으로 현혹시켜 죄송해요. 제가 작성한 글이 제대로 되어 있는지 고수님들 가르쳐주세요(4점은 될까요) If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer My hometown has small population and thus, it has few advanced facilities. When it comes to one change that one might make in my hometown, some may choose a big shopping mall, while others may take a huge university. Since I have witnessed sufferings from my grand mother and mother, I would rather build a complex health center which has doctors, nurses, and other heath-related facilities for the old. My grandmother got married to my grandfather when she was 16 years old and gave birth 10 children, two of which died in their early ages. Since grandfather was weak and had to quit his job for illness, she had to take up all house chores and take care of her husband. With all hard work, she got severe pain on her waist and back, however, she just tolerated the pain and made 8 children go to colleges. To my sadness, she was sick in bed for 10 months and finally passed out. There have been no medical or other facilities that old patient can easily use. Whenever I see the old, I always think of constructing such facilities in my hometown. The same goes for my mother. She was born in poor family and had to give up going to colleges for financial shortage. However, she could married to my father who has been instructing in colleges for her diligence and willingness to take responsibility. She also has been earnest in house work and assistance to my family members. Recently I saw her suffering severe pain in her neck and she told me that she wanted to go somewhere and get full rest. In response to that hope, I could not make satisfactory answer, because there is no such facilitiy in my hometown. To conclude, if my hometown build complex health center, it is beneficial to the economy of my hometown and I can no longer see old men and women suffer from absence of proper facilities. With all benefits, why not set up one?