Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
To begin with, working with others as a team is a more efficient way than working alone, so it is more important being able to work with other people.
People'abilitiy when they are alone is quite limited and weak, but if they gather and cooperate, they would
finish many tasks so quickly and the quality of work would be a lot enhanced.
It is applied to work too.
If people communicate and work together for the same goal, they are going to create a better outcome than people who work independently.
Therefore, it is more significant to be able to work with others than being able to work independently
To affirm my statement, here is an example of my childhood.
When I was a middle school student, I was someone who solved assignments from my teachers with my friends In other classes, because I thought it would bring higher scores.
Every time, me and my friends, who solved assignments together, received higher scores than an average score without noticing by teachers.
If I finished the assignments on my own, the scores I receive would be lower and I would spend more time on that.
On top of that, people have to socialize whenever they could, so being able to work with others as a team is better than working by alone.
People have to form many relationships with others to succeed in this recent society since, as I said above, people are able to achieve much greater things by cooperating with others.
However, working with other people provide the opportunity of making intimate relationships with our co-worker, since it requires us to contact many people unlike working by alone.
Hence, people able to interact with others in work is better than others only able to work by alone.
For example, when I was a university student, I took a Korean history lecture and it gave the students taking it many group projects.
I first considered it as very annoying because I hated to suffer from an awkward silence when I meet people who I have not met.
However, my thinking way was reversed after I made some intimate relationships with my group member.
My group member and I often hung out and gave many helps to each other.
Also, my best friend, who took an architecture course, often said that I am jealous to you making a lot of friends after took a Korean history lecture since the architecture course gave their students only solitary project.
What I mean by this is that we can get many benefits from our relationships and which is formed often when we meet others for working together in our company life.
However, if we are only able to work by alone, this chance will not frequently come to us, so this is the reason why we should be able to talk and work with others
To sum up, we can more efficiently work with our co-workers.
Also, we are offered more chances to interact with other people.
In this regard, I believe that being able to work with others as a group is more important than work done independently.