■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :In the reading passage there is ample support for the author's claim that there are some plausible theories why Moai (고유명사 - 대문자로 시작) were built. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point. First, the professor insists that the statement that the statues may have been built to reward the competition is disputable. A Moai (고유명사 - 대문자로 시작) were lasted 5 century, so if this theory were right, 500 statues must have existed. However, there are far more sculpture approximately 900. This shows that the overall number of statues dose not add up. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that a Moai (고유명사 - 대문자로 시작) may have been symbolized when they won the yearly competition. Next, the professor contends that the statues connected with religious communication is doubtful. There are no evidence that shows the Moai (고유명사 - 대문자로 시작) were used for talking with the gods. Some statues are staring front directly and others are gazing downside, not all the statues are watching the horizon. This counters the reading passage's that the Moai (고유명사 - 대문자로 시작) were the structure to communicate with the gods. Finally, the professor argues that only some ancestors were from the west of the island. The study shows that not only the north side, also from the east side, the inhabitants would came to that island. Moreover, the DNA evidence also have the same context of this evidence. Not just one direction, they would have come from diverse direction. This refutes the reading passage's assertion that the statues were for the glory to the ancestors from western islands. |
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. reading and listening의 비율이 너무 listening쪽으로만 치우쳐져 있습니다.
비율은 5:5, 적어도 6:4 정도는 되어야 합니다.
이는 리딩에 대한 디테일 부족으로 이어지며, 분량 부족, 추가 설명 실패 등으로 이어질 수 있으니
리딩에서도 evidence를 많이 찾아서 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
3. introduction의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
4. 철자 오류가 잦은 편입니다. 심한 감점의 요인이 될 수 있으니, 에세이 작성을 마치시고 꼼꼼히 검토해주세요.
+) 단어를 외우실 때 스펠링을 집중적으로 외워주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*