■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : people can deal with the problem on their own, so the goverment assistance isn't necessary. |
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▶ Your Answer : Obiviously, solving own's problem plays a
significant role in many people's lives where they work or play. Some people
say that the government should help people to solve individual problems while
others do not. If I were asked to choose that I would like to say that people
can dealt with problem on their own. There are several reaons as follows.
To begin with, solving problem by one's
ablility bring a better result in people's lives. To solve problems by
themselves people need to be responsible and diligent . When such obligation
fullfied, it brings a better result.
For example, when my sister in high shool, she often felt depressed while
thinking her life became exhaused rountine and hard to find job. Also it was
too difficult to make friends she could realy on. Fortunity, she was able to
get over that problems by seeking advice and looking for infomation. She tried
to spending time with classmates who had similar problems about finding job.
While some of her classmate
waited the goverment policy about the
increasing job position. She tried to helping each other, she realized her
responsibilty and diligent help her work better, while lazy and irresponsibilty
cound have negative affect on others. Without this experience that finding her
problem by herselves, she would not solve the problem.
Also, the government had to use their funds
and assist not people's problems but improtant things for everyone. The
governmentd money is made up of the people's taxes this
means that the government should mention
where their money is used. For example, in the last year, some people protest
the government new policy that using texas at helping personal problems. Many
people did not support that because they are lot of important matter more than
that. That made peole lose their trust for the government.
I strongly belive that people can deal wih
their own probles. The government should not help them for the reasons as I
mentined. The importance of the ablitity of the people is not overestimated. |
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