▶ Your Answer :
Some people
are impacted by their friends or magazines while buying the product. However, I
think reviews from online communities have the greatest impact on the choices.
To begin with, we can
get a lot of information easily on the internet. Using many communities like
youtube, blog, company website, we can get many informations that we want.
These informations from various people can help us make our choices whether we
purchase the goods or not. Also, just searching on the online website, we can
get information. For example, I want to buy a rare lipstick. But there are no
friends who have that product and I can’t find content of that on the
magazines. If there aren’t reviews on the internet, it’s hard
for me to decide whether I purchase the product. Thanks to reviews from online
communities, I can make a good decision of purchasing.
On top of that, this way makes us get information anytime and anywhere. It’s
impossible to contact with friends or buy to read magazine about the product we
want in midnight. Otherwise, Internet is so active even in midnight that we can
search of the product when we want. Also, We can get information even in
bedroom while resting. For instance, my friend doesn’t have enough time to meet
friends or buy magazines for getting information in afternoon because of her
work. As it becomes dark, she can get times to think about buying the product.
In her situation, reviews from online are very useful to decide what products
she will buy than others. Reviews from online communities help her buy the
product by offering informations when she wants.
To sum up,
reviews from online communities are various and can be searched when we want.
In this regard, reviews from online communities have the most impact on
purchasing choices.
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