▶ Your Answer :Working with other people needs many social skills. So, some people do not like to work as a team. However, personally I think these days, being able to work with other people is more critical than it was before. In the following paragraph, I will explain the detailed and logical reasons for my opinion. To begin with, more and more companies work as a team. This is because, doing so enables companies to produce much better results. Therefore, many companies like Samsung, Google and Apple want employees (단/복수) who cooperate with others well. Comparison between me and my father's working style is the best example for this. When my father was young he usually works (주어 동사 불일치) alone to make presentation and research. In contrast, today, I always work as a team although we work as the same company's financial management section. This example clearly shows that being able to work with other people is more important than it was before. In addition to this, now the world is more connected by each other. In fact, (컴마가 있으면 훨씬 더 흐름이 자연스러워집니다) a lot of people buy other countries' products and sell their products to people who live abroad other country. So if a company (단수) wants to succeed (품사: 동사) and earn a tone of money they have to know about diverse culture. For these (단/복수) reasons collaboration with other culture people is very frequent these days. According to the research conducted by the Korean Economy Center, renowned companies like Samsung, LG and (나열할 때 맨 마지막 element 앞에는 and 을 붙여주세요) LOTTE always do research with other continent countries like USA, England, Brazil before they make a new product to know about their preference (단독으로 쓰이지 못합니다) because their customers are lived in not only Korea but also entire the world. If it were not for collaboration with other countries, they could not (줄임말 사용을 지양해주세요) sell a lot of products. Thus it is safe to say that working with other people is more and more critical nowadays. For these reasons (단/복수), I strongly think that being able to work with other people is more critical than it was before. |