▶ Your Answer :
The reading passage contends that a national
park in the United States should be abolished. On the other hand, the speaker
brings up several points that contradict this argument.
First of all, the speaker argues that
admission fees for visitors need for operating the national park.(What does it mean?) The main reason is because that the national park should update the service, give a salary for some
employees, and maintain the system. (Why's that?) If admission frees will be removed, the
government has to pay to maintain the park with by tax and budget, which means that the tax
will be increased to maintain the national park system. This refutes the
reading claim that charging the owner (Who is the owner?, Why they call citizen as the owner?) is unfair because the owner of the
national park is a citizen.
Second, according to the lecture, it is not
related that charging admission fees makes it discourages people from visiting
them. For example, the Yellowstone that is a famous place and is overcrowded
every year is charging a high level of admission fees. (There are two main verbs in the one sentence) Therefore, there are no
links between the high admission fees and the number of visitors. This casts doubt
on the reading argument that charging admission to national park serve as
disturbing from visiting them. (Hard to understand)
The final point by the lecture is that it is
wrong to say that checking a single visitor and collecting admission fees is a
time-consuming process. This is supported by the fact that such a process would lets
to increase the high quality of services and safety as well. Therefore, to
maintain the safety of visitors, the visitors who were checked and gave the
admission fee could only enter the park and set the cars in the national
parking lots. (What is the point of checking visitors?) This counters the reading passage that checking every single
visitor and collecting admission fees is the time-consuming process.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 1 | 2
| 1 | 2 | Score | Limited 1-16 |
- 주제 내용을 설명하실 때에 admission fee와 아래의 내용이 관련이 있다는 점을 먼저 강조해주셔야 합니다.
- 리딩과 리스닝의 정확하게 반박되지 못하고 있습니다. - 의미를 알기 어려운 문장들이 많이 보입니다.
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