▶ Your Answer :
There might be some
people who believe that choosing a different career
(carrier) for young people is better than selecting a job in the same field as
their parents. However, I personally disagree with the above idea for two
reasons. First, parents have had more experiences
than young people. (enough experiences more than young people.) Second,
it can be an effective way to save their
time.
First of all, jobs that
parents selected are better than the young’s choice. Parents are wise enough to
offer sincere advice because they have had enough experiences. (on almost issue
in this world). There might be some people who believe that choosing a
different career (carrier) for young people
is better than selecting a job in the same field as their parents. However, I
personally disagree with the above idea for two reasons. First, parents have
had more experiences than young people. (enough
experiences more than young people.) Second, it can be an
effective way to save their time.
In addition, selecting a
job in the same field as their parents can save time. There is an old saying,
“Time is gold”. This proverb emphasizes the value of time, and this cannot be
truer in the modern society. We are living a busy and hectic life, so saving
time means that we can do a lot more things
later. Let me bring about my personal story as an example. When I was attending
a university, I spent so much time searching a job. It was
very stressful (to me) and it took more time than I thought. If I had chosen a career (carrier) in the same field as my parents, it would not have taken
such a long time. (a lot of time for searching a job back in university
years.)
In conclusion, it is (the) a good way to save time in
many ways. (searching for a job and obtain proper advice about the
field.) So I strongly believe that selecting a job
in the same field as parents is more beneficial than choosing one in a different
one. (young people to select a job in the same field is better than to
choose a different carrier for themselves.)
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Writing Score (0-30): 20-21
Score (0-5): 3.00-3.25
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