▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that postponing an assignment until close to the
deadline doing assignments should be postponed
until the deadline arrives. However, in my opinion, it is better to work
on it right away than postponing it. There are two reasons. One reason is that
we do not worry about time. The other reason is that we can take get a great score on the assignment.
To begin with, if people do an assignment quickly, they do not worry about
time. If you waste time doing other things like playing computer games, will
time wait for you? The answer will be no. In this world we live in, time is
gold. Since we cannot turn time back, we must save times doing the
assignment rapidly. For example, when I was in high school, I took an important
assignment from my math teacher one day. I think thought that if I delayed doing my
assignment, I could relieve my stress and had have
a lot of chance to do the other things. Unfortunately Eventually, I did the assignment until close to the
deadline when the deadline was close. It was
because time passed very quickly when I concentrated on doing the other
things. In result, I have been decided to do my assignment rapidly
through this experience. It became a turning point in my life.
Next, if people postpone an assignment, they cannot take receive a good score about on this assignment. Suppose that you postpone your
assignment. Would it be possible to have a good grade about this on the upcoming midterm exams? You will not agree
with this question (질문은 답변하는 거지 동의를 하는 게 아닙니다) because, most assignments
are related to the exams. Thus, the only key to have a good grade would be to
do assignments quickly. A study conducted by a
group of education majors is a good example of this. The researchers tracked
the habits of people who always had a good grade when they were in high school
over a 3 year period in order to find out their difference. What they found was
intriguing. The people who had a good score on all subjects in high school
always do did their assignments right
away. The reason was that they have known knew
that it is very helpful for their good grade.
To sum up, people
should do assignments right away since it helps
people to reduce their stress about time. Moreover, in order to have a good
grade, people must do assignments quickly. In this regard, I firmly believe
that doing an assignments quickly is a great idea for the reasons I
mentioned above.
Writing
0-30 Score Scale |
Fair (17-23) |
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17 |
Overall
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