■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic :
Regardless of whether it affect your life, you should know about world events. do you agree or disagree? |
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▶ Your Answer :
Some people say that they should not know about world events regardless of whether it affect their life. However, in my opinion, people should aware of the world events even if it do not affect their life. One reason is that they can catch the flow of our world when they learn about the world’s events. Another reason is that they could sometimes be more brighter people when it comes to the environment of the specific field in the world.
First of all, they could adapt well about the trend of the world nowadays if they know. therefore, they can anticipate their own future especially it will really helpful when they have experiences of this knowledge. To be specific, I believe experience is one of the most essential factors in the world. Imagine that people only have textbook knowledge. Their views will be so narrow. By learning and experiencing, they can not only gain diverse experiences but also broaden their perspective of the world. For example I am working for the Information Technology company as a developer and this field is always needed being trendy and not out-dated. And I am participating the WWDC(World Wide Developer Conference) of APPLE,INC every year when I grab an opportunity. Finally I realized that how the IT markets work in this world and I could find out whether my personal technology can be helpful or not.
On top of that, If I have to do presentation something to the public, I could seem more smarter person in front of them through my broad horizon. To explain, it is required for people to have a wide variety of knowledge rather than deep knowledge of one specific field. A person with sufficient knowledge is regarded as ‘a person of intelligence’ in this world, while others who lack knowledge are simply ignored. For example There were 2 types(A,B) of my professor in the database field. For your information, I have majored computer science at the university. So what I want to tell you is that professor A was so interested in economical situation of the world and he could teach us the importance of database by grafting onto the economy of world. But the professor B was not. So at that time, students thought professor A was more intelligent and he was helping us for more motivation to study.
To sum up, people can grab the tendency and prepare for their upcoming future. Furthermore, people will sometimes judge you as ‘a person of smartness’. In this regard, I think people should know about the world events even if it is not affect to their life directly. |
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