▶ Your Answer :
There are some disagreements over whether
or not reading a good book is more exciting than reading it once. Some people
believe that when people read a book once, it is more impressive. My view,
however, is that there are more interesting factors when people read a good book
twice because people can understand the content deeply. Moreover, the knowledge can be saved in a long-term memory core of our brain.
To
begin with, people can understand the text more deeply when they read a book twice.
People who read a book once cannot acquire important information that
it is enough for people to can encourage their feelings. Also, they are able to
misunderstand the intention of author. However, people who read more than once an
applauding book have benefits to correct misinterpretations they made by looking into the content deeply. Thus,
they would be more impressed by rediscovering and correcting their original perspectives within the important part
of the book. For example, when I was in high school, I had a tendency to read a
book once because I thought that reading a book twice wastes my valuable time.
However, I had the chance to read a book twice because of the assignment that was
related to the book that I have read before. When I read the book, I discovered
the information that I missed previously, which made me to be impressed. Consequently, I
recognized that reading a book twice was important to find out what I have missed and learn profoundly about the content. and have had the habit
reading twice.
In
addition, people can memorize the story for a long time with excitement. in connection with exciting
feeling. People tend to forget what they felt about the book that they have
read a while ago. after long time. Especially, the memory does not last long dramatically reduced
when people read a book once and tend to forget what they read before. Even, people can vacillate whether they read or
do not read. Thus, by reading a book twice, people can maintain the memory that
they are impressed for a long time. According to the study conducted by a team
at Korea Univesity, the research revealed that there was the correlation
between the duration of memory and the times of a person reading a book. By the
research, increased number of reading in a book those who read the book repeatedly tend to remember the story better and restored the emotion better that they felt while they were reading. As a result, the researchers mentioned
that it is necessary to read a book twice or more in order to make the emotion last longer. (감정의 지속이 핵심인지 기억을 더욱 길게 하는 것이 핵심인지 초점이 분명하지 않은 문장들이 있습니다. 해당 내용 검토하여 reason 하나에 맞춰 내용을 tailor 해 주세요)
To
conclude, reading a book twice provides people to discover missed part. Moreover, people can continue to maintain the interesting feeling of what they read. Considering
the above two reasons, it is evident that reading a book twice has more
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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GRAMMAR
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