■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : People should be able to take criticism from other members in order to succeed in a group project. |
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▶ Your Answer :
The given topic of whether take criticism from other members in order to succeed in a group project. Although some people might feel that refuse other's criticism is more beneficial, but I firmly believed that take criticism is better than refuse it for two compelling reasoning which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, taking other group members's criticism improves project efficiency and accomplishment. Unlike the past, it is very important to work with others harmonically. Taking criticism is one of essential to make great team work. To be more specific, taking others's feedback and fix a problem is a good way to improve group project result. For instance, when I was a freshmen, I took a business class and had to prepare a presentation about 'Netflix' with other students. I took a presenter role in the team and prepare the presentation. In the middle presentation, I spoke too fast since I was so nervous. After this, other team members advised me that try to speak much more slowly, so I practiced slow speech and make an excellent presentation in final. If I had not been for taking team members's criticism, my team might not have been able to get nice grade.
Moreover, the ability to take criticism well provides people to solve the problem wisely. It is commonly observe that people who can take criticism are good at solve difficult problem. According to recent study conducted by a world top-tier university, the majority of people who easily take criticism show prominent ability to handle problem than others. When they get negative feedback, they do not take it emotionally and just take the feedback and try to figure out the problem and fix it. Likewise the result of the research indicates my argument is persuasive.
Therefore, I think that it is important to take criticism from other group members to succeed in a group work for the reasons that I have mentioned above. To take group members's criticism improve team work efficiency and also it improves motivation. Furthermore, recent research proves that people who take criticism are good at solving a problem. For these reason, I want to emphasize that taking criticism is better. |
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