▶ Your Answer : Some
people think that knowing how to read and write is not important. However, in
my opinion, it is crucial to know how to read and write. There are two reasons.
One reason is that it helps people live in
this society. The other reason is that it can help you relieve stress.
To
begin with, reading and writing using used in good ways is very valuable today. Imagine
you do not know how to read and write. You will be ignored by other people.
In the worst scenario. there is no place to
stand in this world. So, people should learn ways to use for reading and
writing. A study conducted by a group of sociologists is a good example about
of this. The researchers tracked the habits of people who were not good at reading
and writing in order to find out the importance of knowing how to read and write.
What they found was very intriguing. Most people tended to be ignored by other
people and they usually have had no jobs. The reason was that many companies
required a wide variety of knowledge for people who want to enter the their companies.
Generally, people who have no skills to read and write do not have diverse
knowledge rather than when compared to those who know about reading and writing skills. Thus,
people have to get a skill about in reading and writing.
In
addition, suppose that you cannot read and write skillfully. Would it possible
to have a great grade of this on subjects associated with reading and writing.? The
answer will be no. The only key to have having a good score of on your mid-term tests is
to improve your reading and writing skills and it can also help people forget about some
personal problems. For instance, when my best friend Tom was depressed since he
lost his favorite books, reading and writing skills helped him relieve stress
about it. To be specific, he has a great score of some tests thanks to learning
about reading and writing proficiently. So, I am convinced that it reading and writing is useful for
reducing people's stress.
To
sum up, it is profitable to read and write using good method. Moreover, knowing
how to read and write skillfully can make people be become refreshed. In this regard,
I firmly believe that reading and writing as some good ways is very important.
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