Some people think that playing video games is just a waste of time and affect people badly. However, in my opinion, playing video games is not a waste of time for the following reasons. It can relieve stress and also it helps people make friends.
To begin with, It can help people relieve stress. By playing video games, people can forget their worries. All they have to do is just enjoying the moments. Sometimes it gives us stress because playing video games triggers competition but the advantage of relieving stress is much bigger than the disadvantage of triggering competition. It also increases our life quality by increasing our mental conditions.
For example, a recent research conducted by research teams from the Seoul National University(SNU) has shown that playing video games gives us a lot of benefits. First, It increases confidence who played it. They conveyed a survey and people who answer the questions said that they feel more confident when they finished playing games. Moreover, 75% of the subjects said that it makes them feel free when playing them.
On top of that, playing video games helps people make friends. We can make our new friends not only on online but also in offline. By talking with our similar interests, we can be a friend each other more easily. For example, As I play CS:GO(a video game name), I made a lot of good online friends and I met some of them in the real space last year. We had a great time talking about the games. Also, I made my offline friends by joining the CS:GO clan in my university. It is great fun to me to play with them.
To sum up, playing video games has two big advantages that it can relieve our stress and helps us make friends more easily. In this regard, I strongly believe playing video games is not a waste of time and It is good to people for increasing their life quality.
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