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There are some people who believe that trying to help students to gain self-confidence is more important for a teacher than teaching them specific knowledge. However, I personally disagree with the above idea for the two subsequent reasons. Firstly, these days, knowledge can be gained from various places, but self-confidence cannot be. Also, self-confidence leads students to have a successful life. First, it is hard to gain self-confidence. (So that?) This is because students cannot get self-confidence from various places. However, knowledge is different – students can get knowledge from a lot of sources such as textbooks, YouTube, and so on and thus the teachers’ role is important for letting students gaining self-confidence. (Flow is not natural) Let me bring up my friend’s story as an example. I had a friend called Jonghoon and he had a serious car accident when he was young. So, he had to stay in hospital and could not go to school in his elementary school years. During the period, he studied hard to keep up with follow up their classmates by reading textbooks and watching educational videos through YouTube, and eventually he had entered could successfully enter the top science high school after he was back to school. (Run on sentence) But after a few years later, he gave up studying because he was not sure if he could do well on quizzes and exams. (State reason why) He sometimes says that if he was taught in school when he was sick, he could have gotten self-confidence and studied more confidently. Moreover, students can have a successful life with self-confidence. In other words, self-confidence can let allow students to make important decisions easily and think positively. According to recent research done by Prof. Kim of Korea University, a majority of successful leaders said that they have powerful self-confidence so they could easily decide which career path to follow. Also, they added that it was gained from school when they were young. This clearly shows that self-confidence has power to make students succeed in their life and should be gained with the teachers’ help. In conclusion, self-confidence is hard to be gained from various sources and lets students succeed in their life. In this regard, I firmly believe that it is the most important for a teacher to try to help students to gain self-confidence.
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