Quite a large number of people believe that the government's allocation of
the country's money into space travel is not the best way to use their taxes,
as space travelling needs an astronimical
astronomical amount of money while it does not
produce much. I strongly agree with them and their
there are several reasons as follows.
First of all, researching space travelling technologies, building
space shuttles, and shooting the shuttle through
the atmosphere into the universe costs a huge sum of money. According to NASA, each take off of a space shuutle
shuttle costs about 1,300 million dollars and the production
of the shuttle costs much more while the production of the shuttle may last for
more than few years.
Second, the result of the space travel does not compensate
much for the amount of time and money spent. It is true that the first several
important voyages led to significant discoveries such as the composition of the
rings of Saturn or the fact that there are no lives in Mars. However, as the
astronomers have discovered most of the visible objects in our solar system,
space exploration hardly gives any new informations about the universe
due to physical obstacles. Nevertheless, space telescopes such as the Hubble
has made and are making many new discoveries such as the large scale structure
of the of the universe-the great wall- and existence of black holes.
This is due to the fact that the speed of the space shuttle is too slow in
comparison with photons.
Lastly, investment on space travel, or astronautics, may result in
inventions which may be hazardous to the society. There have been a few
genocidal inventions inspired by aerospace technologies such as the
intercontinental ballistic missile and stealth bombers.
In conclusion,
as investing on space travel is a waste of money and time as well as being able
to be misused easily, I believe that the budgets allocated on aeronautics and
astronautics should be reallocated.
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