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<Lambeosaurus>
The lecturer argues that the possible
function of crests do does not matched with what we know. This contradicts the reading passage’s
claim that possible uses have been identified.
To begin with, the lecturer contends that attracting
opposite sex is extremely doubtful. Bbecause animals mostly appeal to other mates
by using their behaviors and sounds, not appearances. For example, crocodiles
use noises to attract opposite sex. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s
claim that lambeosaurus use their crest to appeal to mates.
On top of that, Tthe lecturer argues that
crest is not appropriate gear to fight. Actually, since crest is placed in the back of the head,Crest is in the backwards of head,
So it is not a proper battle tool. This crests are also hollow , which means it
is too fragile to use for defending or fighting.
This counters the reading passage’s claim
that lambeosaurus fight with other creature by using crests.
Finally, They(they가 지칭하는 것이 무엇인가요?) can’t provide air. Compared to its body, Ccrests are very too small
to provide air to lambeosaurus.
The idea that lambeosaurus used their
crests to breathe when they submerged is logically wrong. This refutes the reading passage’s claim
that they supply air while dinosaurs eat plants in the water.
[Score] 21-22 [Feedback]
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