As the colors of the nature are diverse, people have various
opinions to the given topic. (given topic이 뭔지 첫 문장에 명시하세요) Some people might think that it is essential to have a
friend who shares different interests or tastes. I, however, strongly insists
that it is better to have a friend who is similar to someone oneself based on the following two reasons.
To begin with, similar friends have less conflicts. Friends who are
similar are easy to understand have an easier
time understanding each other in that they have been growing up in same
environments. Thus, they do not argue with each
other when making a consensus. For instance, Jane, my best friend, and I, have a similar died habit diet since our respective
parents lived in the northern part of South
Korea. We love spacy spicy food while the
southern people dislike it. By dint of this similarity, we do not have any
trouble when we choose a restaurant. Furthermore, our relationship increases my
sense of happiness given the fact that I enjoy my favorite food with my
favorite friend.
On top of that, a similar friend can
generate opportunities to improve someone’s talent. If someone have has a similar interest with his or her friend, it is
good to develop the interest further, thus allowing the
person to be being more skillful. They can
not only can exchange a lot of information about the related interest
but also can be a positive competitor to each other. For example, Jung A Lee, a
famous ballerina in British Royal Ballet School, confessed her experience on how she could be a
successful ballerina. She said “as I hanged hung
out with her ballerina friends more often, her competence of ballet improved.”
That is, her ballerina friends became not only an impetus for practicing ballet
intensively but also an informative route to acquire good information related
with ballet.
To sum up, people
can have less conflicts and more talents by having a friend who shares
similarities. For this reason, I think that it is conducive to associate
with a friend who is similarity to someone oneself.
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