Some people might say that one quality of a successful leader is to make decisions quickly. However, I absolutely disagree with the statement for several reasons. First, making quick decisions may cause some mistakes. Second, being fast is not always good.
To begin with, making decisions may cause some mistakes. In my view, one of the essential qualities of a successful leader is making efficient performance. To make highly efficient performance, mistakes should not be permitted. The successful leader should be careful to make at lessening the possibility of making mistakes during important project for company or anything. According to wikepedia research, when a leader makes quick decisions, a mistake is likely to be fifty percent more than making considering decisions. (Awkward) So,it is very good if a leader can make decision quickly and perfectly. But I think making decision quickly is not a quality of a successful leader. (Not coherent)
Second of all, being fast is not always good. Dr. Watson, psychology professor of Washington university in America, says said “ A successful leader should be flexible about things that are going to happen to him.” I totally agree the professor’s statement. I think a successful leader is the one who the most considers his followers and the performance of the team regardless of the time. The leader should focus on the project which he or she should go through. So, while making decision, the leader can considers other people’s opinion and also thinks deeply alone to make better performance.
To sum up, making a quick decision may bring some mistakes. Also, for a leader, performance is more important than time. In this regard, I absolutely believe that making decisions quickly is not a quality of a successful leader.
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