▶ Your Answer : Some people think that a free tour is the best way to travel because it is more flexible and they can do what they want to do. However, in my opinion, traveling with a guided tour group is the best way to travel for the following reasons. We don’t do not need to prepare any specific schedule for the trip and it is much safer than the free tour. To begin with, a guided group tour is traveling with schedules. We don’t do not need to worry about what to eat, how to go, where to see. The guide will bring us to the famous landmarks. The only thing we have to do is just being punctual and following the well-prepared schedule. Suppose that we are planning to go free independent traveling. We should prepare some schedules such as reservation of a hotel, renting a car, airplane ticketing etc. These are somewhat easy to prepare. But when we are busy or we don’t do not know about anything and how to do that, preparing travel will be a hard job. On top of that, in most cases, a guided group tour is much safer than a free tour. This is because group tour has safety regulation and tour guided is trained for the customer’s safety. The places that we go are may not be familiar to us. and Think about Imagine that we are in trouble at unfamiliar places or situations. We will have no idea how to handle the situation.don’t know how to do it. However, if we have a tour guide, he may be a great help for us. Also, a guided group tour has traveler insurance so we can get payback to some extent. For example, my uncle has traveled to New York with a free independent tour. His condition was very good for 3 days but he has broken broke his arm accidentally when he was taking a shower. He didn’t did not have any plan to do for this situation, so unlucky unfortunately he was forced to return to his home for his arm surgery. Also, he didn’t get any refund for the rest of his reservation because it is was too late for to cancel and didn’t have any traveler insurances. In conclusion, traveling with a guide has several advantages over a free tour such as safety, no need to prepare specific schedule and planning. In this regard, I strongly believe that the best way to trip is traveling with a guided group tour.
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