▶ Your Answer : It is often said that studying abroad is becoming popular alternative for many other students. There is a controversial issue regarding whether using it is beneficial for students to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. After taking into consideration of the idea from several perspectives, I personally agree with the idea that smart devices can raise students' study efficiency for two reasons. First, students can widen their perspectives. Second, they can improve multiple skills. To begin with, studying abroad is helpful for students because they can broaden their perspective. This is because during studying abroad, they can meet many people and experience different culture, so they can have skill to understand cultural diversity. For instance, I went to England for three year to study. During this time, I felt many differences especially, culture part. First, I was embarrassed, but I adjusted their life-style a few month later, and I can understand their culture. Without studying in other country, I would not have been able to understand their differences. Therefore, studying abroad is good because people can widen their perspectives. On top of that, studying abroad is helpful because an individual can develop multiple skills. The reason is students are able to build communication skill and social interaction skill during studying abroad. According to a research done by Havard University, 80 out of 100 of respondents have agreed that it is beneficial to study abroad to develop communication and social interaction skills. This is because they have to talk with unfamiliar people of other countries. In one case, students who are abroad have more sociable than those who are studied only in home country. This research shows that it is better to study abroad for developing multiple skills. To conclude, I strongly argue that my standpoints of the two reasons are sufficiently convincing. First students can expand their horizons and second, they can enhance multiple skills.
Limited (1-16) 토픽이 study abroad 에 관한 것이면 잘 쓴 에세이 입니다. (서론에 연두색부분 제외하고)
하지만 토픽을 With the help of smart devices, students can learn more effectively.
로 쓰셨는데, 그 토픽에 한해서는 off-topic입니다.
실제로 시험장에서 이 토픽에 이 내용으로 쓰시면 점수 자체를 받기 어려울 수 있습니다. 유의해주세요. 수고하셨습니다~~
|